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Weak animation and a cowardly message...
I am disapointed that guy gets pushed over and seems to enjoy it.
Reviews for "it'll be okay in the end."
Kind of lame...
I dont know, I can see why people would like this piece. But through entertainment standards it was completely boring, and I did not feel involved in any kind of storyline whatsoever. I did however like the film noir style.
~DZ
I'm sorry, but kind of story is that?!?
Spoiler-ish, so watch first--
So She left Him for boring muscle guy, hurt His feelings and He just waited for Her and sat in self loathing and pain like an obedient dog for Her return? That's the cruelest thing I think I may have ever heard. The fact He took Her back just like that makes him out to be pathetic, like he values the concept of a relationship over the value of the relationship itself. This is obvious, if He's willing to take back someone who hurt him over something so fickle in the first place.
This "chance happening" works for the story in a stretch kinda way, but to suspend disbelief long enough to buy into it is asking a lot of the viewer...The graphics were decent though, fitting for the type of animation it was meant to be, you didn't have to fbf the wiggle vision but you did, so props there.
Millz
A história de um corno manso
Sorry about the portuguese, but I know no other way to say what I want but in my own language.
The animation was ok, but man!, what a crappy story. Just cuckold emo guy that is just ok about being betrayed.
Keep up the good animation, but, hell, how about some nice storyline? For example, about a man that starts dating a nice girl, then he discovers that she's a junky idiot. Then, he haves the strenght to break up and move forward. Think of that.
Hm,
Well it's not all bad really, I left the flash with a great quote and a fuzzy feeling.
This flash really is nothing spectacular, in fact it feels a little like you thought of a simplistic cute idea and just kind of... made it. As some people have said before this is basically just an animatic, although even with superb animation theres still the story part that is a major flaw.. you could of took a repetitive story and turned a new twist on, I.E: he decides to stand up for himself and not take back the girl after she left him.. w/e overall this just isn't that great... shallow story, over simplified animation, good song though.
Keep at it, you WILL make great things.
-DJ