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Reviews for "it'll be okay in the end."

lol this is for sensetive pepole

animation is stupid and clip is to lonnnnnng and its boring

Nice but..

... it was a fine animation, but i don't agree with the message

A terrible moral

It's supposed to be uplifting and inspiring (I assume) but the moral is terrible. You should NOT take back someone who cheated on you, because if they really loved you they would never leave you.

Well...

Well I see where you were going with this. Simple. Inspirational. Instant hit.

It was too simple.

Seriously, some of the stick figures didn't even have arms or facial features or hair or anything. Even the "detail" you put into the main characters was incredibly childlike and overuses the simple message card. The beginning looked like a child was trying to animate this. The lines looked like the sine wave. When they were "talking", it was just little emoticons and hearts. What the hell am I or anyone supposed to get out of that? The music was nice, but again all of this falls into the overused simplistic message archetype. It's been a very long time since I've ever seen it actually shine in its glory rather than crash and burn like this. Another user submitted a submission about a dying soldier who just wanted to say happy birthday or something stupid like that. You have to watch out when you use the simple card, because it'll either be glorious and shine above the rest of the submissions, or it'll crash and burn like this and simple minds won't notice.

As for the actual content, that was pretty simple too. I don't need to summarize it again, but it was somewhat hard to follow due to your oversimplification of dialogue. I couldn't really follow through with it the first time. When going for this simple archetype, keep in mind that you want your message to be clear, not contrived. It was not immediately clear to me what events had actually transpired because of the overall ambiguity of the flash.

All in all, you get my point. I see that you tried for something simple yet elegant, but crashed and burned. It was too simple, making the plotline vague and cloudy, the animation was oversimplified as well, making difficult to sit through, and finally the message may even have been lost on some people as you tried so hard to make it simple.

Try again. You're almost there.

ehhhh

Sorry, but the cutesy style, lame piano music and the overdone story is just too much.