cool
cool :D
Reviews for "Chibipons"
Someone watches hentaikey stuff...
It is an honor.
It is an honor to view this flash at this stage. It is complex in it's simplicity and genuinely fun and happy to watch. However I have to mark you down for some blatant errors that should honestly have been edited out.
The spelling, syntax and grammar errors were numerous and hinestly glaring. The message was lost in some of the errors, it wasn't just, huh wrong there, it's huh, that sentence should have ended three words ago.
This is too wide. The edges of your animation aren't covered by effects, a bit of an oops that hammers home your watching something someone did, not something that is. I really lost myself in your world, but then a scene transition would happen and it's like someone poured coffee on my book, if you know what I mean. It stops being a story and starts being a book.
Amazing work, dumb errors and I hope that if you fix them this gets front page.
Blasted
Needs a spelling check, their =/= there. Some other spelling mistakes, but for the rest quite good.
Try using different colours though, the arrows weren't all too visible due to being black on a black background.
Cool but it has been done before
THis game has a perfect theme but because it was copied already by a much cooler existing game it cannot be made into a game
You need to have more imagination and make a totally different set of characters
all you did here is made the patapon characters square instead of circular
I didn't play all of patapon so i can't say if you copied the green turtley bests cos they are cool but the red dinosaur monster was definitley copied from patapon......
I mean u even used the same music!?
I would've given this a 9(cos i would prefer the little dudes to be circular)
but since it has been copied without imagination already it gets a 6.6
ToxicAcid responds:
I loved the game "Patapon" as ive mentioned in the movie this animation is an inspiration from that game.. Depending on your comment "i can't say if you copied the green turtley bests cos they are cool but the red dinosaur monster was definitley copied from patapon" :D which makes me really happy that its almost immitating the original PATAPON and u have a hard time to explain. all the works in this animation is done in scratch and dino also my own colors and design XD.. ,,I loved patapon the first day i played. i borrowed patapons taste and its style.. im gald that you appreciated it. otherwise this wouldnt be LIKE patapon. if u refer this as a copy i dont mind,, its just your point of view and thank you for sharing.