Reviews for Elf Date Sim (Demo)

[FatedBreath]

You did...

You did do pourly.

To offer some criticism...

Don't post something unless it is complete. You're just wasting space on newgrounds if you post something that doesn't work/ isn't complete. The Purple circle in the background is really distracting and the text is almost impossible to read. And using a solid rectangular image is not a very effective way of representing a character. If you want to use static images, make sure that image takes up the whole screen, otherwise it just looks like you copy/pasted an image into your background (which I think you probably did).

[Glazed12Donuts]

What the shit is this shit?

Okay, I would go off and insult you as much as I could but instead I'll give you some suggestions

1 - Make the text easier to read

2 - This flash only has 2 frames. No flash game/movie should be that short

3 - Cut out the background on the anime character

4 - Add more scenes

Thats about it

[curiouluke101]

hard to read

The main problem was there was no clear button to hit and it was very short (I think).

As for reading the box I couldn't read the third word when ever they said something. I dont think this deserves turd of the week, but I think you should try to fix these kinds of things and have some sort of story. Not just one click END.

[SHAB-Darkness]

OK....

You need to incorporate the entire picture in the flash as apposed to a picture pasted into the white background. Also getting the selection of the options seperated from the picture or in differrent colour is also a better idea. Also you could just use the selection of the options and make a box within the flash with its own colour, that way it is easier to read.

Best of luck.