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Reviews for "Elf Date Sim (Demo)"
Not too good
I admit that the song that was shown was not too terrible, but it was not much. I guess the single drawing that you showed was pretty cool-looking, but it did not do much for me. I guess you did do pretty poorly, as you even managed to spell "poorly" wrong. This seems like the kind of thing that would be more appropriate for Clock Day. I guess it was a little nice how you did not just show gay sex or something. Add in a lot more of a storyline and you could make at least a decent game.
Improvements you should make:
Where do I start? First, make this longer. This is almost in the spam category because it doesn't really have any content. Second, some of the text became hard to see due to a background picture of the same color. Third, make this more fun to play. I understand this is a demo, so you should really follow these ideas to reach the full potential this game has. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product.
Just so you know.
when you get to the second option, right click and click forward. it plays that disco-stick song. not that i liked this, but i thougt it should be known. (P.S. you can only pres forward three times, it only gets worse though) anyway, it definitely needed more even if it's a demo. put more work into it before even submitting a demo.
epic criticism
Most of those people here dont understand the genius behind this flash, they dont see the Criticism here so they focus on other useless things, good job, would play again.