Reviews for 21 Pains

[Haggard]

Subtitles would be nice

Well, the female voice is pretty hard to understand at times, so it would be nice to have subtitles here for a better understanding.

Most of the jokes are pretty funny, though a little more animation would do the flash pretty good. The characters are just standing there motionless, even when the guy is hit in the back he doesn't even blink, heh.

Also a few more details in the background would be nice. The flash gets pretty boring to look at after about 30 seconds, because you've already seen it all in that time. ^^

And I think a few sound effects would be nice. Gunfire for example. I didn't even know what was happening there until one of the characters mentioned something about shots.

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MonoFlauta responds:

Ok thanks for the reviews
Yeah it looks like the animation was a problem, the sound effects and the guns :P but well thanks for reviewing.

[XwaynecoltX]

Needs more scnes

The graphics were pretty impressive,, the "VOICES" were not half bad, i really came to enjoy such a pleasent video and you did very well with the art, and some animation, but this lacked in other scnes i like what you did just wish it had much more effort in taking it into more differant scnes and backrounds

As said it needs to be taken into much more other scenes

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

oks thanks a lot for the review... in our next flash you will see all the things you are asking :p

[R00k]

Radio program?

There is nothing to entertain the eye during this story. Watching two people just stand in place is really boring. I never saw the music video you based this off of, so that may be where you got it from but your writing doesn't carry enough interest to stand on its own.

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MonoFlauta responds:

oh oks sorry that you didnt like it

[Coop]

Too little animation

Man, this piece got to be annoying after a while, listening to Fro's high pitched attempt to make the female voice was a little cringe-worthy, but after all, there was a decent reason to carry on watching. I carried on, hoping to see some animation there, as opposed to just the guy getting shot in the back. Not having seen the video for 21 Guns, I probably couldn't appreciate it enough, but there you go.

With how it all presented itself, you could have given subtitles, to assist people's understanding of the female voice (sorry, Fro) I think that more could have been done on the colour scheme, which was bland and pretty unimaginitive. Sure, if you want to parody the video, why not show us how you think it should have been made? Did the conversation really drown out the entirety of the song? If it did, you could do with showing us how the music video should really have gone.

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MonoFlauta responds:

"With how it all presented itself, you could have given subtitles, to assist people's understanding of the female voice (sorry, Fro)"
it wasnt his fault, i told him to make it if he could because her girlfriend didnt want to.
And yeah thanks for another view of the video because you give at least more ideas :P many reviews didnt make that
Thanks for reviewing.

[Neronewground]

tfok?

he need a purple heart for takin all those shots and not dying...then again with that chick id probably jump in the way of those bullets lol

MonoFlauta responds:

haha oks but is a comedy :P doesnt matter how many shots and where he recieve them XD ah and why only 5 if you liked the jokes? :P