Message is good
I'm going to rate this based on the message and how it was conveyed rather than whether I agree or disagree with it.
This flash gives a clear view of how life is disillusioned and the lost dreams that people had had. It also gave across a sense of how the sense of "what if" always prevails in lives. That's what I got out of it.
The message is clear and as for the animation, it may not be the best but the black and white clearly set the tone for the animation. There's not much to say about it, but not much to criticize either.
Overall, a good work that gives a clear message, but something which has the potential to be much better. Good job, though.
-Komina