Reviews for Alone with me

[Hyper-Shadow-Death]

Nicely portrayed!

Solid, you have that film noir look in this movie. I like how you get to the point right at the beginning of the movie and ease in that metaphor. Very touching emotional yet dark. Good drawings of the main character, motorcycle and city background. Good choice of colors you used. Music matched the scene very well with that sorrowful feel to it. A bit short though but other than that great potential I see you going far with this. Keep it up!!! Overall 9/10 5/5.
Hyper-Shadow-Death

[EdibleShowerCurtain]

Very good!

Reminds me of Fight Club.

[AustinSchnitzel]

Bravo

Extremely polished for a first foray at Flash. You make the character(s) worth caring about in less than a minute. This is a rare skill indeed.

[Ranklee]

Very Nice

Great for a first submission. The music is very fitting and I thought that the animation looked nice too. The scene with the gunshot being reflected in the picture frame was really nice. On a side note, in your author comments your said Schizophrenia, but I think you meant split personality. Schizophrenia has nothing to do with split personality. They're commonly used as synonyms, but they're completely different. Just a tidbit of knowledge for you. Nice video.

lalleba responds:

Alright, thanks for clearing that up for me ^^
I read schizophrenia can cause delusion, hallucinations, paranoia and what not.

But yeah thanks alot for your comments guys. A lot of good points and I will have these things in mind in the future :D

LegendarySleuthLoki, yeah that last Black and white scene might look a little off but I'm surprised noone pointed out a bigger mistake in that one xD
I just realized it after I posted it, and I had to give myself a facepalm+sigh.
Ima keep quiet and hope noone notices -_-'

More critique is welcome!