Well done
Indeed, but the script could of been better, the animation was dodgy, and the bad english really ruined the talent of Tom and Ego, either way, continue to make animations, but just don't collab with the big guys till you improve.
Reviews for "Cooking (bocodamondo)"
bocodamondo responds:
whatever...i think i make a remake but not NOW maybie on 2011
It's to... ugly (for me...)
The title all ready explained
Can't do it...
I think you tried to hard to make it funny. it seems like you tried to sqeeze as much junk you could into this video. I dont understand how egoraptor, tomo, edd, and jaxxy got themself involved in this. The pro's should just stick with pro's. Boco, you should just make you're way to the top with them. dont start off like this. I don't think you'll be up there anytime soon, but keep working at it. 1 because you tried.
I'm only a (pre)teen and I've praticed animation and it was way better than this but I want my criticism to be constructive so you really need to work on the lip syching. It's just a repeat and it's choppy. The lip synching also has messed up timing. The drawings have lots of marks on them so you could improve your art. It's just your average flash. I've seen many flashes like this, it could use improvement with everything pretty much. The lip synching, the art, the animation, even the VOICE acting.
Bad animation
Bad effects Bad animation Bad sound. and cooking is spelt cooking
bocodamondo responds:
FUCK YOU