pls!!!!
pls continue the story..it looks like it could be good
Reviews for "GOLEM"
Impkid responds:
Thanks for your support, i will do my best.
Great Art Direction.
From what I've seen from this flash, you executed art direction well. However, there wasn't much of a story, and I'd like to see more of your talents in episodes.
Impkid responds:
Thanks for your review.
yes! my idea was make an animation trying to use my skills in illustration, and i tried to tell a big story with a few scenes, but the next one will be longer. or at least it will have more quality. thx again
very well made!
awesome graphics, fun story, i seriously don't want to be her ex boyfriend !!!!!
Hmm.. It's good.
In terms of style, this is well made. You made a short that should be done in FLASH: crisp, bold and sharp, lines. lol Needs more work on the feel, though. I didn't much despair on the part where she cries on the trees. Poor girl.
The plot of this short seems to lack a bit detail as to how things turned out be. It'd be more dramatic if you made a flash of how they broke up while she was running to the tree her boyfriend and she engraved their names in-- Or how about how the golem turned out the it looked like when it transformed-- Or how the golem killed her ex-boyfriend.
Sure, you might think the words of her boyfriend telling her that he'll break up with her, or the aftermath of the murder may be enough to tell the story, but they lack the impact the audience might want to experience.
I kinda wished you gave more thought on how you'd show this story. I'd much prefer that. :3
I get the feeling that this kind of plot has good potential to be a series. You know, the likes of XIN--or may be Hell Girl (Jigoku Shoujo). Revenge and Drama. Awesome concoction. >:]
Oh and one more thing... I'm guessing you're a Guitar Hero fan? The style of this short, and in GH feels quite similar, especially the look of the Goth girl. She looks like the female guitarist. Awesome game, my friend said. He loved Guitar Hero too--especially the girl! lol
Congrats, man. You've done good. *thumbs up*
Impkid responds:
Thanks for take some time to write a long review, the truth is, i make this animation with three objectives in my mind:
1- submit a flash animation, using my illustration skills (trying to make it the most simmilar to my illustration style)
2- finish the animation in the less time as possible, trying to tell a long story in a few scenes.
3-and begin a sort of series signed with "Menace city", the place where all happens.
In the future i WILL make more animations. Now that i know you liked it, i'll take more time to make better ones. thanks for all your support.
I think that the tv chilean animation is embarrasing compared to things i've seen on the internet.. Tarboy, Bitey, Happy harry toons for example, im trying to do something different... thats why i submited here, thanks to all for your reviews.
com´on
let me see some killing