Animation good, Story.. eh
So she is going to have a Golem kill a guy because he ended up loving another person aside from her? So this is a story about a psycho bitch that can't let go? Jee.
animation is nice, but the story is horrid in the sense that its about physically harming or killing a person because they simply broke up with a girl.
F***ing Teen Angst
Teenagers think that everything that happens to them is the end of the world. I for one am tired of it!!! WTB> no more teenagers.
It was pretty cool, I liked it. Some of the animation seemed a little stiff (mainly at the very beginning when she was running) but overall a pretty good piece of work.
The Music
Really awesome Music(any names/links?)! Made the movie so much more worth! However it was pretty short. :(
What a nice tree- HOLY SHI-
Yeah. Pretty good. In terms of animation, I'd say top notch, in terms of showing events, I'd say under-average. It feels plain, but the art is good, kinda it.
Last bit with the golem and the girl silhouettes is badass though.
I really think you could have done better.
Judging from your art, you're no noob.
There is blatant use of tweens, noticeable to anyone who's ever dabbled in flash. The most painful being the hand holding the pencil animation. It stood out like a sore thumb because the angle was clearly off as well.
While this is most likely just something you did to get the kinks out, you could have dabbled in a little frame by frame. Or at least used more than one or two tweens in certain areas to make it more dynamic.