TERRIBLE VOICE ACTING
When people watch these flashes you have to keep in mind that previous work people have viewed has set a pretty high standard for anything new that they see. One of the aspects that usually needs a collaborative effort to be mastered is voice acting. If you take a look at some of the better rated flashes you will find that they had someone else do the voice acting for them. Thats definatly the best choice for just about every animator, since your expertise is in animation. You definatly need to do that with your next flash cuz the voice acting here is really bad. By the time sonic had gotten to the car I had to shut it off, there was no way for me to appreciate the comedy writing or the animation (which seemed pretty decent) when the bad voice acting was such a distraction. You just got to, got to aim high with every portion of your creations and dont be afraid to ask for help. Better luck next time.