Not bad...
Needs moar actions and a cut down on all the talking, but its good.
Oh, and add a preloader and restart button.
Reviews for "DragonBall Animated Flash"
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OK, decent concept. The idea of SSJ5 is mind blowing. But it took a long time to get there, and there was barely any fighting. There wasn't really much of a story either, just the same old grudge. But all that is not to say it doesn't have some great potential. If you can pull off the sprite-fighting caliber of Proxicide or Alvin-Earthworm (no small task to be sure) then you will have a hell of a series. Good luck!
Well Done
Very nice job there! I'm guessing you just animated the fighting and the powering up right?
You'd think that once they got to Level 5 they'd just destroy the universe by clicking there fingers eh? I stopped watching after Cell, didn't seem worth it, still a Dragonball (original) fan though.
Nice job, will wait for the next one!
mrqball80 responds:
Thanks, dude. My video will be better. Thank you for your honest comment.
That was fucking cool.
Although the LOL's kinda took the mood away, a little bit
potential
the only thing that really kept me going was the anticipation of the fight. but you see, the thing is if you really want them to be charging up for that long you need to make the shots more interesting at least. that is if you're not going to cut them down, which i think you should definatly do. also vegeta saying "lol" from time to time took away the experience. i wasn't sure if it was supposed to be a humerous spoof, or a genuine story you were telling here. also the fight at the end was kindof lacking. take some notes from some of the other flash artists around NG. the powerstar is one that comes to mind immediatly. all you need to do is fix these things and your movie will even better then it already is!
basically you need:
more interesting angles
cut down the carge up time
unified tone
well choreographed fighting
you already have the mood and feel of the dragonball show! you got serious potential! keep up the good work!
mrqball80 responds:
Thanks for your honest comment and tips. I will definitly work on that in my upcoming videos. You know that (LOL) means (Laugh Out Loud). I prefered that instead of HA HA HA HA HAAAA!!!! If you know what I mean.