Cute
You drew it out long enough for it to be DBZ, that's for sure.
Reviews for "DragonBall Animated Flash"
Jezz, do you think that's enough charging?
I mean, i'm all for charging you're power levels but DAMN! How much frames of charging do we really need? The battle was a big let down after the charging as well. However, the graphics were really good, and you said "to be continued" which probably meant all this was necesarry, so good job on this one.
potential
the only thing that really kept me going was the anticipation of the fight. but you see, the thing is if you really want them to be charging up for that long you need to make the shots more interesting at least. that is if you're not going to cut them down, which i think you should definatly do. also vegeta saying "lol" from time to time took away the experience. i wasn't sure if it was supposed to be a humerous spoof, or a genuine story you were telling here. also the fight at the end was kindof lacking. take some notes from some of the other flash artists around NG. the powerstar is one that comes to mind immediatly. all you need to do is fix these things and your movie will even better then it already is!
basically you need:
more interesting angles
cut down the carge up time
unified tone
well choreographed fighting
you already have the mood and feel of the dragonball show! you got serious potential! keep up the good work!
mrqball80 responds:
Thanks for your honest comment and tips. I will definitly work on that in my upcoming videos. You know that (LOL) means (Laugh Out Loud). I prefered that instead of HA HA HA HA HAAAA!!!! If you know what I mean.
Good
The good :
Good anticaption
Good sprites
Good SFX
Good Music
Decent Dialogue
The Bad:
You should have better camera angles
You should use the slow mo and speed up and Zoom in and out.
I look forward to seeing your improvement.
Check my page out I'm working on a Street Fighter Flash Animation series
mrqball80 responds:
Yeah, I know. Note: It was only a little preview so my acual video will have all that stuff in it. Thanks for your honest comment. Also, I will check out your SF flash. Ive acually made 1 myself and lost all my data when my computer crashed. If you have any question on that, let me know. Thanks, dude and good luck on your flash video work.
just like the cartoon
charging for an hour just to fight two seconds...although it was well put up so i guess it was ok