Was not bad.
>_>
Please man. No more making Vegeta say LOL.... Kinda deters the story in a sense...
But....It does remind me of the show alot....constant powering up...for like...5 episodes...xD
Honestly though. This shows huge potential.
I just hope you can keep up the work. Good luck to you.
Oh that, LOL(Laugh Out Loud)!!! Yeah we both know how Vegeta is, very slick and sneaky, and he really does loves to laugh when he thinks hes the bad ass that can whoop you in a battle. Take a look back at the old Vegeta when he 1st came to earth. Thank you anyways. I promise you that my video will be better than the preview I just put up, and I'll cut out most of the (LOL) since it's going to be more serious. Thanks for your comment on this.
potential
the only thing that really kept me going was the anticipation of the fight. but you see, the thing is if you really want them to be charging up for that long you need to make the shots more interesting at least. that is if you're not going to cut them down, which i think you should definatly do. also vegeta saying "lol" from time to time took away the experience. i wasn't sure if it was supposed to be a humerous spoof, or a genuine story you were telling here. also the fight at the end was kindof lacking. take some notes from some of the other flash artists around NG. the powerstar is one that comes to mind immediatly. all you need to do is fix these things and your movie will even better then it already is!
basically you need:
more interesting angles
cut down the carge up time
unified tone
well choreographed fighting
you already have the mood and feel of the dragonball show! you got serious potential! keep up the good work!
Thanks for your honest comment and tips. I will definitly work on that in my upcoming videos. You know that (LOL) means (Laugh Out Loud). I prefered that instead of HA HA HA HA HAAAA!!!! If you know what I mean.
very cool
that was very good coming from a die hard dragonball fan
a few things
The beginning was good, but it started to get a little too long. Suspense is good to establish the story but after a while people start to lose interest. When Goku said that he hadn't had a good fight since Kid Buu, that's not true. He trained and fought Uub at the beginning of Dragonball GT and Omega Shenron at the end. Those were definitely intense battles. Also, why does Vegeta say "LOL"? He never says anything like that in the tv show and he doesn't seem at all like the kind of person who would say that. One more thing, the music at the end of the video doesn't end when the video loops back to the beginning. This definitely looks like it will be an interesting video if there is more action in it.
just like the cartoon
charging for an hour just to fight two seconds...although it was well put up so i guess it was ok