Whoa... Guns are a bit wacky.
The animation is great! And don't worry about the voice stuff, just get an audio editing program.
The Guns.... Recoil isn't that much unless you suck with them... And how'd he miss with a machine gun, and a SMG vs Pistols?
haha thanks man its just all part of the story lol you gotta forgive me i was half drunk when i came up with the story
Hitman Wars...
It's a pretty good madness combat tribute. You did well on many important assets needed to animate madness characters properly. I didn't like how the characters keep their arms in one positions. The voice-acting wasn't as bad as you said it was.
thanks for the comment and you dont have to lie about the voice acting i no how bad it was i rushed it this morning all the same thanks for the positive in put it is noted for next time
Teh Lulz
Wasn't the world's greatest animation, I saw a mini-gun float, 9 mm clips last longer than bad action films, and someone miss with a mini-gun, I really don't know how you miss with a gun that pulls out 4000 shots a minute, anyway other than that, a bit of improvement could be used, make the weapons dropping a bit more smooth, and perhaps make it a bit more realistic, such as the guys moving\running a bit quicker and the sniper not missing 15 times, the mini-gun wielding maniac a tiny bit more accurate, and the clips on the guns run out faster :D. 3\5, 6\10.
i did all that to make the story more exciting how exciting would it be if he walked out that door and got blasted by a minigun or his head shot off by the sniper straight away
Not so bad
So, yeah... you got a lot of work to do...
but the animation wasn't bad.
You have to work on your backgrounds and the voices (ask a friend to be a voice actor next time, because is kinda confusing when all the characters has the same kind of voice), everything but that is quite good.
You just need practice man, keep working and hope the next episodes are better.
duely noted thank you for your kind words
It was alright
You need to realize a paragraph story line is rediculous. That's like going to the movies and just reading a book. Let the story unfold itself. Less bullet holes too, they were just an eye bothering amount of black dots. Work with tweens a bit more and sooner or later you'll look back at this and laugh.
i laugh at it now trust me this is last years work i just never got round to getting a microphone anf finishing it thanks for the review