Not so much
The story was interesting, but not very well written, and it seemed... choppy, and sounded like you replaced some words with words you got out of a thesaurus. Unnecessarily pompous. It wasn't read very well either. You seemed to stumble over a lot of your words, which is strange if it was your own composition. The animation was pretty lame, too. I guess I'm saying, I don't know why this is on the front page.