Very Impressed
I love the storyline, but wish there was a little more of a solution if you know what i mean. It just seemed like you didn't know how to end it. Overall I enjoyed it and cant wait for more.
Reviews for "The Invisibles"
Very Meaningful...
I thought it was very good because of the message behind the story. People should be able to live their own life without about moochers and people who need others to verify their own identity.
The only part I thought was odd was the bit about jumping into a latrine. Is that from personal experience?
Virgilcomic responds:
lol no, there was a story in our boy scouts about that though
So close!
It was excellent, but the plotted thinned and became much too long. I would have added it to my favorites if it wasn't for that.
Pretty good.
I thought it was a pretty good flash with a good story. Good job, and keep 'em comin'.
It seems kind of iteresting...
..but it's difficult for me to follow the whole thing without any subtitles. It would be very nice of you to put them.
Otherwise, the animation was nice, nothing too awesome or even colorful, but B/N was more than appropiate to discribe this kind of people and it ran smoothly. The music gave good ambience without getting more protagonism than the voice at any moment. Your voice was also nice and all, but it was just hard to follow for me at some parts.
Overall, very good, but without the subtitles I just can't get all the juice out of it.
Virgilcomic responds:
will do for future(subtitles), i know what you mean, i am not super articulate at times