This was very good
I was not quite sure what I was going to see when i opened this flash video, but the story is very unique and the art is not bad at all. You kept my attention the whole way around. Keep making videos :)
This was very good
I was not quite sure what I was going to see when i opened this flash video, but the story is very unique and the art is not bad at all. You kept my attention the whole way around. Keep making videos :)
Nice one pal !
Cool story bro ! There is no color and the shapes aren't that high quality but you did a nice narrating and you have a good plot.
A very interesting story...
...told with no hemming or hawing. Seems like a fine, abstract student piece. Well-narrated and imaginative, with minimal imagery.
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this story is cool but i dont think the invisibles ever thought they were bothering elmer
maybe they forgot
yay somthing original
ausom now make another with color