keep animating, for sure.
great animation, even for an inexperienced flash animator.
definitely keep it up.
the flash dragged on a bit; meaning you could have achieved the same feelings/emotions/reactions in a shorter period.
the grammatical errors annoyed me slightly.
but just reinforcing, excellent work. keep it up. great potential.
Cute.
Though the story was predictable and the animation wasn't top notch, it was still touching, and the choice of colors and textures was very nice. Good job. :D
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I dont get you people and all your high ratings. I sat through this thinking it was going to be good and it bored me half to death without even a decent ending. It was just like, yea we all know its coming, hes going to melt as its been done a hundred times just get on with it.
It was nothing new/interesting.
someone see flower and say "WTF this piece of shit will die soon!"
other human see flower and say "this is beutiful... so bad that it will die soon.".
got it?
everyone see what they want to see.
Although the plot was obvious, presented well
The music fitted very well with the animation (what little of it there was...). The story was very obvious. But the music and use of scene changes made it reasonably good.
Grammar errors: At the beginning, the mother said: "Kevin, go home!", when I think it was supposed to be "Kevin, come home!"
And one at the end, which I can't be bothered watching the whole thing again to remember. (It was the part where he said: "You promised you would never leave me" or something, just after that)
Finally over
I'm sorry but it was just so slow. We all knew what was going to happen and it just took so long to get there. The story had potential but really I just wanted to pity the kid and I may be off base, but, I don't think that was really what you were going for.
If the tempo had been a little better I'd have scored it higher. Sorry bud.