Wow..
Even though i knew something like this would happen in the end,
it still was a touching.
And for 8 days of work i think it is pretty amazing work
Personally, I didn't think the graphics were too bad and the soundtrack fits the flash.
I did not blow me away, but it kept me in my seat and i watched through the
5 min and 44 sec and i liked it.
Keep going!!
PS: Don't care too much about the graphic, but more about story/plot, music
(maybe voices if you gecide to do so) and then about graphics.
You can develop you own unique style of drawing/animation, which would be more interesting than better animation that looks like something already known.
Last thing I have to say:
Look at "Egoraptor"'s animations.
He himself said in an interview with "Rina-chan", he would do "crappy animations" but still everyone loves his videos.
I hope this could help you in some way and maybe get you to do more good flashes.
- Hope to see more from you,
Aska Light, aka. Der-Zocker-Aska