Reviews for Don't Smoke... Please?

[LimitBreak]

Nice message

While the animation itself needed work, I could tell you were trying hard to animate it. The music you choose also fit very nicely into the movie.
But the important thing is the message you were trying to pass, which has led me to believe this was made uniquely for your father, right? Or maybe someone's father?
Or did you randomly choose to write "Daddy" at the end? Anyway, next time you make a video, try to make the animations more fluid. For instance, look at someone running in real life, and try to copy that into the Flash. Search for human pics and study anatomy by yourself. Those are small things that would greatly improve any Flash videos.
Keep up the good work!

StupidGir responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

This was made for a friend of mine's dad, who will remain nameless.

[SimCorder]

Got a friend going through something similar.

This kinda sums up how my friend and his sister react to their cigarette addicted father.

As for the movie itself, could of used more detail to the graphics and maybe a background (but I guess the never ending purple fits). However the coloring, choice of scenery and music, fitted the movie very well.

StupidGir responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

The neverending purple was on purpose to add to the idea of a polluted world (representing second-hand smoke).

[XwaynecoltX]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
I liked this, allthough it was short it had some smooth graphics a good meaning and some nice music, you should make more that are like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit longer next time

~~OVERALL~~
short but good meaning

~X~

StupidGir responds:

Thanks! I will try to improve next time!

[coporalbiscuits]

contrary to what other people said about it...

I actually found the graphics a little choppy. The music was good. My advice is to either alter the FPS or do something to make the graphics a bit smoother. I also felt that you could probably do a little more with this animation. Especially the cigarette, i think that, you could probably add a little smoke drifting up and maybe flickering the glow of it a bit too. My favorite part of all though was that you made the person in shadows. Very good job!

StupidGir responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I will keep that in mind on future stuff!

[bobthecow]

I completely fail to see the point

It's just too vague to understand. And the message really isn't going out to a lot. I hate cigarettes but that's not really something to put up on newgrounds as a flash.

However, the animation itself wasn't really bad, but could use some improvement, as well as the graphics. Try something different next time, if you make something that people like, but also has a message within it, you'll be much more effective at putting the message out there, and having people enjoy it at the same time.

5/10 because its your first real flash, but otherwise 4/10. Try harder.

StupidGir responds:

Thank you!

I will try harder next time!