What a little bitch
If I threw a bucket of water on my dad I'd get beaten with a wooden cane.
Reviews for "Don't Smoke... Please?"
StupidGir responds:
It was the message that is important, not how the message gets across.
Also, it was a hyperbole of how to get the message across, saying that the only way to get his attention was a splash of water (a metaphor for reason.)
better than your previous works
i suggest that you create a longer animation, have a better scene of the water dropping on the cigar, and have a longer animation. the meaning is good, and the song is good.
StupidGir responds:
Thank you for your review!
wtf 1 because its a number and 0 is mean
blam blam blam blam wtf all the stuf u just reviewed me like maore animation seriously use it jk with the wtf but foreal make it more flueny
StupidGir responds:
Ok, I will work on my animation skills.
(You should try to brush up on your grammer skills...)
I hope you tried it...
You can't criticize something if you've never tried it YOURSELF.
StupidGir responds:
Oh, I have. Nasty stuff.
Well
You have a lot of work to do improving your skills. Try making your animations a lot longer. The message was good, if not a little childish. Overall, more content is required to make this a good flash. A good story or message means nothing in a flash animation if the flash itself is no appeasing to the eye, for the fact that no one is going to pay attention to it or feel for it if they don't like what they see.
StupidGir responds:
Thank you! I will take this in to deep consideration!