Has potential
just keep practising the animation skills and don't rely on tweening so much, its good to have a little free drawing in flash, some say it looks sloppy but once you get good at it you can make animations look stylish. I now it takes a long time but the top animations weren't made in 10 minutes. Story is the only reason you got above one but even that needs to be revised.
Actually most of the movement don't have tweening, they were all done frame by frame with a few exceptions. There are just some movements you just can't capture through tweening. And just so you know, it took me about a month to completely finish this, I was just learning with animation. And even stil my desire for a Feb release was ruined by 8 minutes.
Hmm
For a first attempt its not horrible, and you took the time to animate that red guys head frame by frame which is promising. But yeh, just keep practicing i guess.
Sure, I will.