bring back the alien!!!
first very funny flash super cool!!!
Second,Bring the littleAlien guy back he was soooo awesome make him return as a ghost or a zombie or something!!! A clone or a special alien power that makes him reform!! Just do IT!!!!!!! Cuz I could go on and on about how and why you should!
ALIEN! ALIEN! ALIEN! I'll chant from the roof tops, you'll see i'll be on the news before you know it!
Sincerely,
Mr.Smiles703
I made something as random as possible for the first episode. But it is possible I could bring him back at one point, but it probably won't be for a while. Also, I thought of him more like a bug kind of character.
I REALLY LIKED IT!
I THOUGHT IT WAS ENTERTAINING. I ESPECIALLY LIKE THE TANGLED CHIBI. HES MY FAVORITE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Great! Glad you liked it. :)
Not bad for a beginner
However, I'd just like to point out there are plenty of beginning voice actors, who will join anything for exp! As to the toon, the heads are good, but I very much recommend some work on the bodies, rather a turn off.
Really? I think the bodies match the heads just fine. :) Besides, those are just the default bodies.
Good attempt
So this is your first real flash? Yeah, I can tell you put a lot of work into it.
Of course it doesn't look as good as flashes in the top 50, but I'm really those artist too started out creating simple movies like this.
There are a lot of details here that I like. For example the eyelids. You used them in a very good way to show the feelings of the characters. It's a simple but very effective way to show how a character feels about a certain thing.
Also, the story was nice, too. It's simple yes. But at least you didn't just have a bunch of characters killing each other. Well yes, that one guy gets killed, but it's not like the whole flash only consits of mindless killing.
So, keep practicing and I'm sure that you will create much better flashes in the very near future. :)
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Thanks for your review, and it took me a while to realize this is only the first episode. I think with the other ones I'm slowly getting better,
could be better!
You have a good idea on which you could improve on!
My main tip would be get some vocie acctors! it will bring the characters alive! i dont like how the text is set out! and some of it moves to fast to read!
Yeah, thats what a lot of people tell me. I'll have to find a way to fix it or atleast put in a rewind button. But for now you would just have to go back manually if you miss something.