You know I liked it.
Ill tell you what I think the next step should be for you on msn next time we speak, it'd be too long to put into this review. Too tiresome too, and also private :s
A little c&c-
I said not to put the "*pain*" because it doesnt really work imo.
The woman is quite small. I dunno if this was just me, but I couldnt hear the music.
Glad you finally have a solo sub though :D