A Little Mismatched
It seemed a little bit all over, in means of the story line. But overall, it was pretty interesting and not too bad.
A Little Mismatched
It seemed a little bit all over, in means of the story line. But overall, it was pretty interesting and not too bad.
a pretty good flash
i would say it leans more towards the good flash animation then it would on the funnier side ... i think the characters could have a little more backround
but it takes effort to make a flash without using crude humour so good job.. i would still like to see more funnier jokes tho
decent decent...
very decent start peeps, look forward to the next instalment..
Good
Art: 6,25 - Could be improved. I like the way this is heading but it could use a bit more camera work (like more different angles) on next episodes, as well taking better care with details, using a cleaner and firmer trace - try to avoid drawing more than one line on top of each other and careful using that brush you picked - the lines aren't getting thin or thick on the parts where they are supposed to, it's just random and that leaves the final look too heavy and dirty.
Lastly about art, work more on the lighting to give it a more reallistic feel.
Please don't get this critic wrong - I liked it and would love to see it get even better, I'm just giving my point of view as an artist.
Voice Acting: 7,5 - TomaMoto did a great job on his voice acting and too bad we couldn't listen more of Francine here (*fan*). The other characters could use a bit more intensity and the voice actors should try to loosen up a bit - they seem preety too tense, almost uncomfortable doing their job.
Sounds & Music: 7 stars - Awesome music, try using different moods of music as well.
Overall: 7 stars. I'm looking forward to the next episodes!
Well written!
This was an over all great animation, the only problem I had with it was it was lazy in some places. Tis is one of those serires that get way better over time and I hope to see more.
congrats on front page!