Reviews for Sketched - Last Requests

[Jargon5]

Hah

This made me laugh out loud. Very original idea, kudos to whoever came up with it.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks, I came up with the concept, but the real credit goes to the individual actors who fleshed it out and gave it life. Thanks for the review.

[SirMax]

8/10

I notice that the dialogue is the main thing here. And you pulled it off nicely :)
I was kinda thinking that the guy was pretending to be dying to make the
other dude do his chores.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks. We are and always will be proud of our dialogue. That would have been a funny twist if he was pretending, but I guess there's always a hundred different directions you can take a scene. Thanks for the review.

[Vehdrehl]

Subtly amusing.

I liked it. Animation was good, voice acting also. In fact the blonde haired guy's voice reminded me of Dante's [clerks/2] voice in some parts which is a definite bonus. Keep up the good work and improve a little on writing and this could be a good series of flicks.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Haha, thanks. I actually played the blonde guy, and I love playing that kinda consistently downtrodden character that is so well represented by Dante, it is a very interesting device in the comedic world, like the exact opposite of the macho uber hero of the action world.

On a similar note, one of our actors (Jake Richardson) was actually in Clerks II and Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back. That doesn't have any real relevance, but still, an interesting little fact to drive it home. Haha.

Thanks for the review.

[SIDROG]

It was actually pretty good

Good voice acting...funny idea. Family guy cut to the spoke of scene stuff.. Good job

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks, we wanted to give this style of writing a try (I know it's very Family Guy/ first few seasons of The Simpsons) and I'm glad to know you think it was pulled off well. Thanks for the review.

[XwaynecoltX]

Good stuff

Wow, This was Enticing I had no idea that a Flash that looked so simple could have so much style. What really makes this work is that it doesn't try to be Super fancy or anything. This was pretty good nice animation even some good humor I did think the voices could have come with some subtitles but not really needed but still pretty impressive, this film was kind of long and that was ok too And so there you have it another entry submitted with some interesting and odd happenings but those are the ones I like, it was not the perfect of submissions but you still added a twist here and there, and i generally enjoyed your presentation, I guess this type of flash may only target a certain market of viewers but guess thats ok too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few improvments could be done here so below and even above in the review I have posted a few ideas that could really make this flash take off, so use some of these ideas, even as basic as some may be but in the end your flash will be much better for it. and who knows you may see some unexpected oucomes aswell with a more efficiant running flash entry. This one could use some subtitles, not needed but would be a good feature of the film.

~X~