Hah
Nice work. It was pretty funny but I feel it could have been funnier. I wish it could have been like Merry Sketchmas, one of my favs of all time btw ;)
So yeah, keep it up, and good job to the voice actors!
Reviews for "Sketched - Last Requests"
sirjeffofshort responds:
Yeah, I wanted to use this sketch as an opportunity to work on my animating skills so in this whole short there isn't a single drawing used more than once (aside from back and forth cutaways and the mouths). Because of this it was scripted differently and there was a bit less improvisation but I think it is all in all important to experiment from one short to the next otherwise you end up churning out the exact same thing ten different ways. People may consistently love it, but you never grow as an artist.
I'm really glad you enjoyed this short none the less and we're happy to have you as a returning fan of the Sketched series. Haha. Stick around because next month... let's just say I can't get through the audio alone without cracking up.
Awesome, but...
I'm givin' you a 9 because the gun fire sounded like a popcorn machine on the frits and there was some mouth problems on the daughter scene. Very well done. - V65
sirjeffofshort responds:
Don't get me started on the gun fire. Haha. There are some SERIOUSLY bad gunfire SFX out there. The ones I found weren't terrible, but I had to dampen them in order to make all of the dialogue audible (which is the most important thing in these sketches.) so the quality did degrade somewhat.
As for the lip synch... lip synch is the bane of my existence. It is so absolutely tedious that my brain freezes over and I do sometimes slip up. Not making excuses, just being honest.
Thanks so much for the constructive review and the great score.
hahaha
thats funny dude. good job. a little depressing but good nevertheless
sirjeffofshort responds:
I guess it is slightly depressing when you think about it... that's why I spend most of my time trying to think about stuff as little as possible. Haha. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the cartoon.
nice
it was pretty good, not as funny as the others...cept i liked the part about the break dancing competition lol
really liked how you went back and forth between past and present. also, thanks for confirming that you were doing that, with the line from the wife: "he told you to rotate my tires, he's dead!" cuz i was getting confused after the dry cleaning scene haha
The end!
It made me Lol! "Like a women" Hahhaha!