Same complaint as everyone else.
Like most, I was expecting a fight. Each basic movement had about 3 frames and had more uninteresting story than anything. Very cliche and whatnot. What I really enjoyed was the lighting and atmosphere. Work a little harder on the animation and you'll have yourself a front pager.
poor...
sorry, but the only animation was short transitions from basically tweens. Not only that, but your characters were simply empty catalysts to a poorly thought-out storyline. You need to make sure that every frame your characters are dynamicly moving, or else you end up wiht a picturebook animation. Good art, despite the fact that the style was a little too simplistic in parts. (especially since this was done by hand) I wouldnt complain about the storyline and tween-esque animation if it wasnt for the fact that no true fighting took place. The whole time they were doing cheap dash strikes, with a light burst to show they hit. That is a poor choice, and it showed clearly.
using a pencil
if this was done with a peaces of papaer how come u didnt work harder on hte work?no offense if ur not a good artist. i use to draw like this interesting but it wasnt that exciting it was dramatic.you should have given them some good clothes.u might have potential post another one but this time have more action in it also.................................
.................................i dont want this comment or review to get kiked off im just saying the head was too big on the guys and the mouths were half drawn and wat happened to the guy that turned his bro into a monster?i think u should have put more thought into there wardrobe over all pretty good story line work a little bit on ur art ur a good artist just work harder on ur art and i think ull be pretty good need any thing to know about art just ask me :D and all who read htis im going to be positng some flashes in the summer or 2010 who knows got too much work
had great potental
1/10 for the song, The song doesn't match up with the theme at all. This could of been a great story... But things like animation lacked greatly, i didnt like how he had a rectangular mouth open the whole time for a whole sentence. It's like talking with your mouth open, I recommend learning how to tween things like this and time it to the subtitles. Otherwise Nice try. I also noticed how you were trying to kill time doing long break scenes and ect.
Eh...
I have to agree with past reviews. This subject material was way over used, as stated just a few reviews down, "Dragon Ball Z style scenes over desolate landscapes" has been done before, and before that, and before that. The animation is great but animation is half the battle.