I really like it
this flash is really good, one thing i recommend if you have the time would be to go back and smooth out the frames and add in some voice acting. I understand that it was done entirely in pencil and smoothing the frames would be a lot of work but it would greatly improve the quality of this flash. keep up the good work!
Nice work
It could use a bit of touch up work, but that could be said for any flash on NG.
I could also argue that it's not very original at all, but, you have to start somewhere with this sort of thing, and you did a good job of it anyway.
Overall I say it was well done, 8/10.
And, for the people on each side (0 voters vs 10 voters)
Give it a rest, both sides look ridiculous arguing over this.
WHOA!!!
I can tell this took a LOT of effort! Nice work!
Might I also add that you are a very talented artist!
a'ight!
I'll say this--your effects were very good, with the blurs and the shot angles and all, your backgrounds were pretty solid, however, i think that this is a project that needs to be done when your skill with human anatomy and kinetics (the way the human body works) is a bit better. It really would improve this piece a lot. The characters were a little out-of-proportion, but don't get me wrong--what cartoon isn't?--but it took away from the quality of your work. Keep on working, though! you've done very well.
Wow...
well done =) The art was decent and it showes that you put your heart into this. Overall your backgrounds are what impressed me =) I wish I was that good ><
I would like to see more from you,
Lexa
PS. Though anime is not one of my fav styles I still enjoyed this flash a lot. Don't listen to those haters. They either dont know what they're talking about or they just have two much time on their hands ;) Take everything with a grain of salt ( i know, old saying =P)