Wowww...
I agree whit this guy in almost everything, but i just love your anymation style and i think an 6 is just to little... You get 8 from me ^^
"To be reasonable..."
by: Dienewbies
date: 5 minutes ago
I will not swear nor have I liked to insult anyone for their effort or hard work. But I think this is something I'd to comment on.
To begin with, your flaws lay within the entire piece,
Character designs were extremely plain and stale, so maybe work on that or something
Story was not shown very well, and that was contributed by the stale character designs, no one could tell what was going on since both characters look exactly the same.
Lack of eyes, maybe work on that, the only eyes you had was that dark guy. But I know people like hair that covers eyes, well that's not gonna cut it, start doing actual eyes.
Backgrounds were great, simple, yet simple easily cuts it.
Sound, not much there, mostly since it's just music the entire way through. It was appropriate for the entire animation, which was good.
Now dear sir if you delete this review, I'm afraid the masses are correct in calling you names, that you do not wish to be called.