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No words could ever discribe how good this is...
This is truly one of the best Flashes I've ever seen...
the art was simple, sure but that's to be expected
since it was originaly done on a sheet of paper
But the Music, the Action & the Plot
went perfectly well together... it was truly amazing
it Shows true talent :) So keep up the good work (Y)
I'll be looking forward to next Flashes ^^
And as "fuzzykirmet" said: Keep on rocking ;P
pure gold my man
this is truly one for the books sure the charecters were a bit simple but the song and action went together and man it was an awsome story. look forward to future works keep on rockin!
Nicely Done...
Sibling rivalries never get old, especially if one's genetically altered. lol. Good stuff, dude.
awesome
This was a really great flash, just work on the arms a bit... A little bit to thin and thick at some places. But great for just pencils.
Just some items to work on
It is not too bad.
Just some items you might want to focus on in future creations
1. Show the eyes of your characters. It is really useful and it allows for your characters to show more expression. It's never really a good idea to cover their faces with hair simply because it detracts from the emotions you may be trying to convey.
You don't need to go the traditional anime style eyes either. Just something so we can see the real emotion on the character's face.
2. Just clean up the art a bit. This is only a mild complaint but the swords seemed more like sticks instead swords at points in the movie.
3. The storyline seems a little off. They are brothers fighting, clearly something happened to one of them. The one brother fails to stop the experimenting on the other then they have the epic battle.
But then it's confusing. Is one fighting because he showed up too late and failed to stop the experiment?
Is the one experimented on know what's happened and simply defending himself, he seems sad which would be at odds if he's some evil minion now?
All in all, a decent flash.