The people who are voting zero are expecting too much it seems, this is great. It's cheesy YES that's half the idea! Yes the sound quality isn't perfect but if you all will notice in the authors comments he's looking for voice help, obviously quite aware that his sound quality isn't the best. Give 'em a break people! It was a bit drawn out, and the lines did seem a bit forced at times but that can actually make it funnier! :) Just something to keep in mind though.