Reviews for "Don't eat that Sandwich!!"

that was great

keep up the fine work


The voice acting was so obnoxious that I couldn't finish it. That actually hurt my ears a little bit


The animation is nice but the jokes arent funny they kinda suck

Nice man

good ol' fashioned cartoon
i liked it :D

That was almost bone dry

The art was robotic, the audio... well, there aren't really enough synonyms in the English language that mean poor, to describe what an unbelievably terrible job you did on it, The plot left a substantial amount of things to be desired, and the characters (terrible voice-over(s) aside) were completely dull in their dialogue. I'm not sure if you were trying to categorize the mall cops as absent minded or dim witted, but if you're going to try and parody ignorance, please do it by the book. Personally I don't give a damn about bad animation, as long as one compensates for it with humor.

You have it in you you just need to work on your material and your audio selection.