Alrighty...
A little sound would've been nice, some voice acting maybe...it was alright for your first, good practice. Please lose the loop. People love the option of being able to replay. I think you should have put some humor into it, it was basically an emo girl waking up and getting ready for school. Try to put some humor into your next one. Good luck!
thanks anyway..but could you teach me how to put a preloader?
hey
Whats up with tyhe shitty quality? did you even make this?
what did you use? Flash 0.01?
i'm an amatuer..i just started last night :(
Not bad for the first try...
I hate monday's too...But keep up the effort, I'm sure if you continue working on it, you could do better. Guess the emo girl has something to look forward too :p
thank u
Pretty good!
I think you have some skills, but why was video? I though that would be better in vector format, anyway. That was strange, but I see that you can do much and much better next time. Good luck with your next work, girl. :3 Cheers!
thanks. i'll make something better next time.
not bad
it's not bad, and is certainly on it's way. it needs to be longer though, and please add a preloader so it does not loop.
i dont know how to make a preloader..i'll make another flash with preloaders and everything..gah