promising
i think you could be a pretty good flash artist given some time. i think you need to sharpen the picture, make the vid a bit longer and the text a little clearer. other than that good job.
promising
i think you could be a pretty good flash artist given some time. i think you need to sharpen the picture, make the vid a bit longer and the text a little clearer. other than that good job.
Wonderful
It was quite good, but alas the text was a little to fast.
A very solid first submission
Like many have said, the text was a little too blurry. No real story, but a nice insight into a character's mind. I look forward to seeing your future animations.
Good!
It is a good start :) jsut Try to make the quality of the images better and you will get a descent flash movie :^)
I liked this and the music made me relax thanks! ^_^
Great
text could be improved though :)