Haha
Man, I'm really glad I watched this. This was put together really nicely. Suprisingly, considering the subject matter, the story both engrossing and funny. I digged the animation style for the most part, although certain points felt a little overdone, but it was entertaining nonetheless.
GOOD work! Keep it up.
Simpley Hilarious!
What it lacked in background music it easily made up for with hilarity, couldn't get enough of the cheesy cliche teenager, and loved the animation style. Great twilight zone type ending and wonderful joke with the boyfriend at the end. Only suggestions would be a little more music because the animation seemed to drag, but it was necessary to make this animation as great as it could be! Also loved the fake band, hilarious joke on modern music, kudos!
Heheh thanks. Most of the BG music was given to me to incorporate as part of the competition for which this Flash was made. Episode 2 will have more music made by the CamPanulas and other musicians rather than just something walloped out by one of the judges and his younger bro! :D
superb
Wonderfully made, with a great animation style and some great changes in mood. Every time you thought the plot was going to get predictable it went in a new direction.
Only 9 stars though due to some average acting from some of the support phones. I didn't FEEL the bitterness :)
;_; Only the Discarded's leader was bitter... I had to cut out a lot of their subplot due to time restrictions, but it was supposed to have 287 causing a revolution as all the other discarded left with him. There were a few other scenes snipped out, too, and it left a few unxplained holes in the story, but overall it made it more suitable for folks with shorter attention spans (like Mindy)! :D
Woah...
Nice work. VERY smooth and fluid animation and what a twist! "OMG, my first cell phone!" Great plot. Full points all the way!
awsome
the longer the better and the fact that it was animated exelently makes it perfect