Great style and solid retelling or this story
Better than the one I heard in Church. Normally I'm all about funny stories on new grounds because the artsy ones are self indulgent crap nobody gets and high school kids are the only ones with enough spare time to ponder the "meaning." I thought you had good animation and it kept me interested through the whole thing, and it wasn't too long. Mad props, and don't take these 4's, 3's and 1's too seriously. Sure they're an audience but it doesn't look like any of them know how to draw, so who's worse off for the experience?
PS I love your backgrounds