Reviews for Dragonball Z Episode 2

[Haggard]

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The story of this is bit wired. I didn't know what was going on there. Ok, this is Epdisode 2, maybe I should have watched episode one before this.

The music was very nice and fit well to the flash. Also the sounds you chose were very good.

The graphics could need a clean up, as they looked somewhat blurry from time to time. The sprites could look a bit better, too. None of the sprites had a real face.

I liked that you had a different text colour for each character, so it was easy to see which character said what sentence.
But I think you should use subtitles here. A black background and white text works best. You can then use a small picture of each character to show which line is said by which person.

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[Shanus]

Hmmm

A very strange film, that seemed to be a bit all over the place.

Graphically it was alright, it would've been good if you used some sort of V-Cam and zoomed in on the characters while they were talking etc. And I didn't think the drawn sprites looked better than if you justed used the sprites themselves.

The sound was good, nice use of effects etc, very well done there, was missing voice acting, that would've made the movie for me, the text above the characters head looked abit off, and was hard to read.

Overall, room for lots of improvements, but you've got the basics of a very nice series going there, just keep improving

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[phantomlassuk]

Not bad

A decent effort of a movie it was good and fun to watch to.

Graphics.6/10 The look of the sprite figures over the background did not work, to well. The scenery and action are decent, the fighting cool and the dialogue fun. The problem i found was the figures are to small, against the background. I could bearly make them out. Making for a hard time to seee the fights.

Sound.6/10 I liked the music it was okay and fitted well. The speech bubbles were okay although i found they seemed, a little hard to read ,as they seemed to be off the screen. The music was good and suited the mood.

Violence.5/10 Not as gory as numer 1 but still pretty decent for seeing effects and such. This is pretty mild i liked the holes in the ground.

Humor.0/10 Sorry for the o but this was laughfree which is fine ,its a serious movie but thats okay. This did not have any funny lines ,but it not meant to be funny.

Story.3/10 Very weak no plot more action fighting, then a serious story flash.

I liked this as it was fun to watch and read the coversations ,and enjoy the fighting scenes it was nice to see DBZ charators.

The problem was the lack of fun to this moive, it seemed very bland and unorginal. I found that i did not enjoy the story or lack ,of it the fighting scenes were mediocre and lacked the appeal they could have had. The figures getting smaller were offputting, as it made them look poor. as at the start they were bigger.

I think this is decent enough i liked the short length ,more of a story and depth to the heros would have helped.

Overeall a movie spoiled by no story or depth to the charators.

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[Coop]

Meh

Surreal plotline, that moved far too fast for an episode of Dragonball Z. I've seen fights that last for fucking ages on there, so maybe fleh it out more with some fighting action.

The manipulation of the sprites is crude at best. I know that they don't produce the best picture quality and I do appreciate the different perspectives that you used for them, but it's not as good as it could have been. Yes, we all thought that the Goku throw was funny, but it's the only joke in the whole flash. You've got to make the decision early on if you're going to be funny or serious. With so few jokes, I'd go for serious and take that joke out completely.

Another way to improve it would be to find a better stance for the flying Goku. No man in flight should ever expose his groin like that. Kid with slignshots beneath would make a bloody mess, for example.

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[Dev]

Could Use Some Work

Well, the graphics and animation weren't too bad, but they seemed to be lacking still, for the most part. I know you used sprites in this, but seeing some more changes in facial expression would have made this better. Also some more close-ups of the characters. The one of Piccolo at the end was pretty cool. I thought the backgrounds weren't the greatest, though they did get the job done. They didn't seem to have too much going on, which made it kind of blah to watch.
The audio was good, the music really fit into the atmosphere of what was going on. The sound effects were also pretty good, no qualms there.
I didn't see this as a flash that was meant to contain much humor, but I got a few laughs when Goku threw Gohan up in the air when "teaching" him how to fly. :P
Overall, though this could use a lot of work, I did find it interesting and kinda entertaining. Good job.

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