Not Bad at all!
There were some grammatical errors and punctuation missing, and some of the text was going off the screen, but apart from this it was good- Good animation, quite witty.
Reviews for "Dragonball Z Episode 2"
Panda thinks its okay!
Not bad xD A bit odd but not bad.
Hey, it's better than the first.
Like the headline says, this video is better than the first. I found it funny when Goku kept dropping Gohan everywhere. I have one question though...is this series a parody or trying to recreate the show? I need to know so I can base future reviews on what this is. You get a 6 out 10 and a vote of 2.
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The story of this is bit wired. I didn't know what was going on there. Ok, this is Epdisode 2, maybe I should have watched episode one before this.
The music was very nice and fit well to the flash. Also the sounds you chose were very good.
The graphics could need a clean up, as they looked somewhat blurry from time to time. The sprites could look a bit better, too. None of the sprites had a real face.
I liked that you had a different text colour for each character, so it was easy to see which character said what sentence.
But I think you should use subtitles here. A black background and white text works best. You can then use a small picture of each character to show which line is said by which person.
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Hmmm
A very strange film, that seemed to be a bit all over the place.
Graphically it was alright, it would've been good if you used some sort of V-Cam and zoomed in on the characters while they were talking etc. And I didn't think the drawn sprites looked better than if you justed used the sprites themselves.
The sound was good, nice use of effects etc, very well done there, was missing voice acting, that would've made the movie for me, the text above the characters head looked abit off, and was hard to read.
Overall, room for lots of improvements, but you've got the basics of a very nice series going there, just keep improving
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