Sad
If that happened to me, I'd probably kill myself.
Sad
If that happened to me, I'd probably kill myself.
very good
This story was basic, yet very complex. Proboly one of the few drama - type flashes that has been good. Oh, and if u make more, make them show how the chick died.
sweeeet
Very nice. There aren't many good dramas on the Portal these days. I can't wait to see more.
Well done
I liked this movie and the 9 is so you'll make more of them so more can be explained. I like the main character, he seems pretty cool. Long trench coats always make anime characters look badass.
nice
Once again good to see someone on story, keep it up.
Also art is very sweet on it, except for the falling roses part. (not sure if you took actally pics of roses and put them in), they just did not fit in with the rest fo the art.
Also it might have been better if you could get a half way decent voice actor. Although if you can't it is better off to stick to text then have bad voice acting.
keep up the good work.
Thanks for your critique, glad you liked it :) If I could do it over, yeah, I'd DRAW the roses instead of just using some stupid jpegs.
As for the voic, we had toyed with the idea, but thought it would seem out of place. the only thing that would have had voice at any rate was the last part when he actually speaks.