what were you trying to do?
like, were you making a parody or are you just a slacker or something?
Reviews for "Flash DS"
good first attempt
for a first attempt its pretty good, but you have alot of bugs which you should have fixed before submitting, and the mario game was very short just 1 enemy which you cant jump on. but i can see youve put some effort in so ill give you a 4/10. I think you will learn alot from this first game so ill b looking out for some better games from you in the future :)
You're on the right track.
For a first flash project, it's not half bad.
But it's still not ready for a site like Newgrounds.
I suggest smoothing it out a little, making the physics in the Mario game a bit more realistic, and maybe adding more things to do.
Almost
This is pretty good for a beginner. With a some more work and additions this could turn out to be very good. It has potential, use it to your advantadge.
Things to fix:
Lagging Mario Game + fireball reload time
Mario game is too short
Pictochat can only draw
Fix FTW
Good
It is nice to see the younger generation doing flash work. You must keep at it if you want to be good, but i see you at least have your basics well done. Heres to hoping you do well.