It was a nice try
I liked the music and it seems like an interesting idea. Lol the picochat thing has this funny glitch where you can draw anywhere XD (including outside the DS screen). Sure there was lots of glitches but it is okay for someone who is a first timer. I think you should continue working on it because you got the right idea of what makes a unique flash.
Oh dear...
Well, a 'Flash DS' isn't the worst idea ever, you just went the wrong way around it. Pictochat was basic, but it could of been worse, you could made it look more like pictochat though, like the keyboard ont he lwoer half of the screen, and add colour selection.
There wasn't much else ont he DS it self apart from a pointless reset button.
Then theirs the Mario game, it seemed alright at first, but you didn't use Actionscript well. Mario jumps way to high, you have gravity on to high or something, the fireballs aren't effected by gravity, then there wasn't even a whole level, after the shy guy it was just a pit of doom. I jumped off and didn't respawn, and also couldn't see the Menu button because it went along with the level.
So, you have so good talent kid, you just need to practice more and you'll get much better at this, don't worry.
-Peace.
Eh?
Well, it was almost not suckish, but not quite. Needs some improvement. Mario music would be nice, so would a more better picto chat. Ya, just work on those two things, then re-submit it.
Not to good
I didnt really like it to much, there was only one little part in the mario thing and the pictochat wasnt that fun.
please
put up something COMPLETE
the mario game:
all you can do is throw a fireball, kill one guy, then jump off the cliff... you cant do anything else..
picochat:
cool idea, except one problem, WHERE IS IT???
thats all there is!