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This could be a really good song, but you got to get the beat stronger. I mean i have never in my life seen a trumpet player play softer than they should, and same with guitar. The beat is awsome, and also the singing needs a little. You need to be stroger, i cannot influence that more. You can't just talk, you cant just get the rythem, you need style. You need spunk, and thats all this is missing. Get stronger, god im using that word alot, and this will be at the top of ska, and maybe even be a song famous outside ng. The only reason im saying so much is because i myself play trumpet in a band, not a like 5 person like a 150 band with lots of people, and spunk is the only thing that makes songs great or suck.