well
as a begginner project it was ok.
but to be honest i got bored and closed it before it finished. you need to make your work in such a way as to keep the viewer engaged.
good work tho.
Reviews for "Final Fantasy Tenki"
RPGsrok responds:
Well, it was a beginner project. As I said in my comments, I can do better (see Dual Arms Precipice). Seems a bit unfair to review something you couldn't finish, but I understand. It just goes to show the longest thing isn't always the best. Thanks for being critical but not abusive; I appreciate your review.
Well, it was okay.
The animation could want for more and it was pretty drawn out with too little action to make up for it. However some of the effects (Namely the Ultimate Storm) and a bit of the humor was pretty good, I'll give it a thumbs up.
This isn't one of my favorites but I liked it somewhat.
lol:D
omg japaner^^
wow...
And yet anouther flash "artist" steals a song from OCremix, and does not credit the user in any way. ("Chocoarena" by Draggor...used during the credits)Real nice. Just because he's not Nobuo, dosen't meant he dosen't deserve credit as well. How would you like it if somebody took this flash and didn't credit you? I'm guessing you wouldn't like that.
Also, don't compare this with Final Fantasy A+ ....there is hardly a comperison between the two. You say don't comment on the graphics, and you say you can do better...well then do it. I could say that I could do better to, but it dosen't make it true. Also, there was a huge lacking of humor in this flash...
I think the biggest problem with this though, is it's slow and very drawn out. Have you ever played a Final Fantasy game, where a boss fight is over with just one new move. No, so if you speed up the battles and put more into it, it would come out much better.
I'm giving this a 6 to be fair, because it did have a purpose, and it did look like you put a lot of time into it....but I just feel it was lacking in many areas that made FFA+ a more rewarding experience for me.
Also...Domo Kun was way to obvious to be funny. I knew it was him the first moment you saw the shadow. Should have gave him a trenchcoat and a dramatic reveal.
Anyways...keep doing what you enjoy, and please in the future credit all your material.
RPGsrok responds:
Thanks for being... Mostly constructive about this. Not crediting Draggor was an honest mistake. If you were to hypothetically go to the last scene now (and wade through a minute of dialogue and animation, god forbid) you would find that his name is now credited under composers.
To tell the truth, some of your critique is irrelevant to my next project, simply because it won't be a comedy. I freely admit that 'A+' is, no comparison, amazingly better than this and anyone who says otherwise is lying. Trenchcoat? That's a good idea...
Anyways, I can never guarantee my next work will meet your expectations, but I can say right now that it will be much better than this. If you want, I can PM you when it comes out, and you can see how much better it is. Thanks for reviewing.
Is this Final Fantasy A++ Part II or something...
I felt like I was watching FF A++ II...but I wasn't. Same chars, same Japanese dialogue, same set up...I know this was inspired by that Flash but I think you could have stretched your creativity farther. Also, I'm not the biggest fan of real life video on Newgrounds. If I would have seen this on Youtube I would be a bit more enthusiastic.
You guys did put in a great deal of effort as I can see. I do not like to be one of those Reviewers that Vote 0 and say whatever utter negative things they say unjustly. I feel giving you a 6 is well deserved in regards to this Flash from a Newgrounders point of view.