Definately need to see the next one...
Animation wasn't bad at all, and I loved the mood that the music brought to the setting. Voice acting was better than most toons I've seen too
Reviews for "Conditions1:The New Reign"
A Decent Prelude To Future Work...
I liked this animation - whether you put some thought into the story or whether you're borrowing from the other sources for inspiration, you've set yourself an excellent foundation for some eye-watering flash skills going forward.
Audio was nothing overly-fantastic but you'll agree it wasn't needed for more than mood music and shouldn't detract from the flash. Animation style was good too, though sometimes it could be a little cleaner - e.g. the announcer's glasses could have had frames to distinguish them from his face more, and the glove was monotone - some detailing, or colour gradient would have made it strand out. I can see it becoming quite key in future flashes so making it distinct seems important.
By way of constructive criticism I'd recommend some clarity around the setting - the speaker was talking to a room, but we don't know why, who he's talking to, or what the peace corp are - is this year 2007 or the future?
Some panning across a shadowy audience or glimpses of key figures in the crowd would be good to give some ambiguity and keep the people watching wondering who he's talking to. I can't second guess where your series is going but the background snippets all put future episodes into a nice context.
All in all, really decent flash skills and I'll be watching future episodes to see where this goes!
i'm rooting for ya
Everything looked pretty good to me in this animation. I was ready for the real story to kick in, and then it just stopped. what a cliffhanger. i'm ready for more! ya got a great story, so best of luck, this series looks its gonna be pretty good once ya get goin.
Hmm well
This eps just want me to see eps 2 ^^ And im watching it now ^^
ooh!
i like this idea for a flash movie.. it looks like with more episodes it will get really good