Reviews for Conditions1:The New Reign

[CheesyPretzels]

A Decent Prelude To Future Work...

I liked this animation - whether you put some thought into the story or whether you're borrowing from the other sources for inspiration, you've set yourself an excellent foundation for some eye-watering flash skills going forward.

Audio was nothing overly-fantastic but you'll agree it wasn't needed for more than mood music and shouldn't detract from the flash. Animation style was good too, though sometimes it could be a little cleaner - e.g. the announcer's glasses could have had frames to distinguish them from his face more, and the glove was monotone - some detailing, or colour gradient would have made it strand out. I can see it becoming quite key in future flashes so making it distinct seems important.

By way of constructive criticism I'd recommend some clarity around the setting - the speaker was talking to a room, but we don't know why, who he's talking to, or what the peace corp are - is this year 2007 or the future?
Some panning across a shadowy audience or glimpses of key figures in the crowd would be good to give some ambiguity and keep the people watching wondering who he's talking to. I can't second guess where your series is going but the background snippets all put future episodes into a nice context.

All in all, really decent flash skills and I'll be watching future episodes to see where this goes!

[msg2007]

was ok

some concepts were good and some didnt make too much sence or could have been explained better
voted 4

[hopetodie6543]

Well..

The overall idea is very interesting. But if this professor can make such a device, cant he make a more advanced, less violent one. The police, or any law enforcement bereau would never immediately resort to violence ina crime situation. They usually use stunning techniques. Like pepper spray, bean bags and batons to immobilize offenders, not to kill them. And if this device was constructed to kill criminals, were would the court come in? And if this was the only weapon the police had to use against crime, a small, misdemeanor would mean death. So yeah the whole idea is cool but much too unrealistic.

DJJ-asshole responds:

Sure they can, you don't necesarily have to kill people.

You can make a barrier to trap people, it's just an example.
Also: You'd rather have a bloodshed or not?

Because blood is cool.

[Kuandohan]

Great

I liked it, Good voice acting and everything, That was really cool.

[Omnipotentous]

Loop Hole

The flash came together in a nice presentation for what looked like an important panel. However there is a loop hole and I don't want to give anything away, but the host can give the glove away willingly. Thus, a crooked cop (or whomever has the glove) can give the glove away with free will. Other than that it seemed like a very plausible idea for a futuristic weapon. I look forward to seeing its conclusion.