Reviews for Conditions1:The New Reign

[S4cr3d-Cr4p]

I don't know why people say it has a good story...

Seriously. You need to follow your ideas through. Someone has just come up with something that can move particles. First it would have been used for science, creating new chemical structures and manipulating tools. So you should've had the inventor talking about it's benefits to science etc. Then it would've been taken by the military and police forces, and used against criminals. Transforming matter into different forms is a retarded use of that kind of power as well - you could just pick up the criminal as easily, or rip them to shreds.
You didn't even think the terms through - how can you voluntarily take off the glove if you are dead? If you are dead, you can't give permission, so what is the point in the last terms?
The voice actor spoke their lines too quickly, and without enough passion or even correct vocal intonation. The script was also weak and I've already explained the weakness in the concept.
Finally, the quality of animation was average, but could've been better. Music was good though.

Perhaps some things to work on for the next episode.

DJJ-asshole responds:

It's just a story, pure fictional, so it doesn't have to be correct, it could've been another dimension...

Also, about the science, this is NOT a scientific story, I didn't want it to be some National Geographic show... I'd rather make it a mindless use of weapon story.

Also, about the shredding to piece, yea, that's going to happen, IN FURTHER EPISODES.

The last condition, about being dead.
No, you don't do it voluntary, but you do not resist either... How about just ripping it off someone's arm, when he's dead, the answer is: No, it doesn't work.

Oh, and the next episode is out already, for if you didn't read the comment.

[bama4678]

ok!

good storyline good voice acting ok graphics i give 9

[LaDMalek]

Woah

Bad ass storyline,Great voice acting and awesome weapon! I want one of those xD
Awesome Graphics too,so all in all i give it a 9/10

[Chibi-Robo-Pwns]

hmm...

great story, good background music, and you make the scientist sound like he was working nonstop for days.

get a little better animation for the people, and you have yourself an a+ flash.

[hopetodie6543]

Well..

The overall idea is very interesting. But if this professor can make such a device, cant he make a more advanced, less violent one. The police, or any law enforcement bereau would never immediately resort to violence ina crime situation. They usually use stunning techniques. Like pepper spray, bean bags and batons to immobilize offenders, not to kill them. And if this device was constructed to kill criminals, were would the court come in? And if this was the only weapon the police had to use against crime, a small, misdemeanor would mean death. So yeah the whole idea is cool but much too unrealistic.

DJJ-asshole responds:

Sure they can, you don't necesarily have to kill people.

You can make a barrier to trap people, it's just an example.
Also: You'd rather have a bloodshed or not?

Because blood is cool.