Nice work.
Like a couple people have said, it gets a little cluttered in places, and a little anticlimactic, but for your age, this is some really great work, all the melodies work, they just pile on top of each other a little too much, y'know? But I'm fairly impressed, given your age, what program(s) do you use?
Yea, I'm really a music type kid, ya kno'?? Lookin' back at this song now, I totally kno watcha mean with the clutterin'. I use Acid Pro 7 cuz FL is a little to hard for me, but I'll get there one day. Also, I took the advice from this song and applied the advice into my new song if you wanna check my new one out. Stupid zerobombers though.